Saturday, 12 January 2013

Week 7

Tidal Grip - Pitch Feedback- Research- First Animatic

In week 7 we got the feedback from our presentation, which consisted of both 
good and bad points. 

Good
Presented well, clear and precise 
Enthusiastic 
Showed the potential of a good idea 

Bad
They weren't sure exactly what the story is 
Thought that it came across like a product pitch, rather than animation  
and questioned the originality of the surf concept

Over all they gave our project a red amber light saying that if we 
were to proceed we would need to really clarify a story 
and make sure it was something that hadn't been done before.  

So we regrouped taking the points on board and how close we came to being shut down 
and set about doing some further research. I went to my local beach up in North 
Cornwall Polzeath and Sophie went out with a mini film crew to test the camera 
we may use. 

(My Research from Polzeath)
  
(Sophie camera test footage) 

We then got straight into reworking the story and Sophie put together 
a rough animatic, which you can check out below. 

Feed back we received: Although the idea had pushed past the previous 
story people still didn't understand what was going on and thought that 
the environmental message was a little to strong.  

video

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